Bon Jovi Its my life 3 Act structure

Act 1 scene1 

Daytime interior in a boy bedroom 

Story beats

.He was on the computer playing games

.Mum ask him to take out the garbage

.When a picture of a music band pop in to his screen

.Friend called asking where are you

.He ask for location and she mention in the tunnel

.Boy rushed toward her location

.He took his jacket and rush toward the location

Setup: quickly come and joined me a girl asked

Conflict : mum ask him to take out his trash 

Act 1 scene 2 

Daytime , interior Apartment 

Story beats

.he kisses his mother goodbye and take out the trash

Act 1 Scene 3

Daytime , exterior stairs

Turning point take a short cut by jumping off from 2nd story

Story Beats

.he walked down the stair and climbed down the ladder 

.he took a shortcut by jumping off from the 2nd floor story to the street

Act 1 Scene 4

Daytime, exterior street

.he saw a garbage truck and hop onto it and conveniently throw the garbage at the same time

.he hop off at a street and bang into an lady and her dogs and the dog started to chase him

.he saw a group of Elvis while been ask to took shot for them

Conflict: Banging to the dog while on his way to the tunnel , wasted much of his time

               helping a few people to take picture on his way since his kinda kind hearted.

Act 2 scene 5 

Day time , exterior abandon building 

Set up:is he going to be on time

Conflict: where are you , his running out of time ( up the stakes ) time was against him

Turning point: jumping off from a 2nd story building to make his way and stop the dog from chasing

Story beats

. Again jump off from 2nd story to prevent the dog from chasing him

. Still running but clock showing time is ticking fast

Act 2 scene 6 

Day time ,exterior on the track

. Running with the marathon runner , and grab a water bottle on his way too cool himself

Act 2 scene 7 

Day time , exterior traffic road

Conflict car traffic

Story beats

.Running through the traffic

Act3 scene 8

Day time , exterior tunnel

Climax : On his last lap of journey whether he reach on time

Setup: he reaches the tunnel he can see the band

Act 3 scene 9 

Day time , exterior car 

Conflict : car jam , on his way he drop into the sun roof of an open car and just nice a gang kick he out of car and lost more of his time

Story beat

.He make his way by jumping on top of the car to make his way to see the band with his friend

.fall into a sunroof of an open car 

. get kick out by a gang 

Act 3 scene 10 

Day time , Tunnel

Story beat

.he reaches in time and enjoy the band with his friends. Running with the marathon runner , and grab a water bottle on his way too cool himself

1 sentence pitch for the 5 story

Fantasia Flamingo : There was this odd flamingo who wanted to play his yoyo instead of dancing with the flock of them, even though he was force to joined them, he was determined to play his yoyo, and he manage to play his yoyo even till the end.

For the birds :  A flock of bird were resting on the wire string, however a big blue bird was trying to blend into this group of bird,unfortunately the group of bird does not want to blend in with him, by planning evil thought to get rid of it, they managed to kick him out, but ended up losing themselves as a matter of fact.

Jurassic Fart : 3 creature , T-rex , pig and a small dinosaur was resting side by side, they were trying to out do each other through fart, surprisingly the pig was the winner.

Pixar knick Knack : A lonely , sad snowman was trying to get out from his snow globe so he could joined everyone under the warm sun, however no matter how hard he tried his attempt was futile

Bon jovi its my life : A teenage boy was late for his concert with his friend , he risked his life to get to them as fast as possible and finally he get there just in time.

Chapter 3 - The Harvest Envy - 1 sentence pitch and morale

Chapter 3 – The harvest envy

1 sentence pitch:  A necklace which was able to give eternal beauty had finally came into the possession of this beautiful lady, however being beautiful was not enough for her, she wanted power, during her planned to over throne her highness a grave secret had been unlocked from the necklace given an unexpected ending to them as well as the continent.

Morale: Cherish what you have now , before it teaches you to cherish what you had.

3rd chapter - The Harvest Envy

Chapter 3 - The Harvest Envy

For many centuries the emerald necklace had been passed down as an heirloom to the next generation. The emerald itself possessed only two abilities. One of its abilities was bestowing eternal beauty while the other remained unknown. However there is a saying regarding the other ability and I quote;” the calamities will rise again if the curse of green ever falls on the faces of the human race.

In Forenia, the most glorious city in the world lived a woman named Teal. She was well-known as one of the beautiful women in Forenia. Even though she was nearing her sixties, she looked barely older than one-third of it. Her girlish figure, seductive eyes and blond hair had many men begging her for marriage. However, what she treasured most was her emerald necklace that hung over her delicate neck.

Above Teal in rank and authority, stood her royal highness, Mero, step mother of Teal’s late mother. Mero was almost an immortal herself. She was the oldest, wisest and the most beautiful woman in Forenia . Teal had always been jealous of her. In order to be the center of attraction, her evil thoughts grew within her heart.

During the ceremony of the ‘’harvest eclipse “which was also known as the “youthful rain”, the rain served as a light in the darkness ,its very presence melted away one’s fatigue and enhanced one’s beauty and life. However the droplets only landed on a small portion of the land. In addition, only Mero, the wisest, knew the ritual. Thus, Teal had planned to disrupt it.

As the ritual began, cunning Teal waited in anticipation. Mero drew a circle in the air. Silver light accented the trace of her finger. The circle was perfect it looked like it had cut into the very atmosphere all on its own. Mero muttered enchantments and the circle turned blue and landed below her feet. Soon ripples of energy spiraled down from the sky and it began to rain on her. In that moment, Teal forced her way into the magic circle and caused a great damage to Mero. Blood trickled down the fallen Mero’s face, as she witnessed the pure harvest eclipse transform into an unholy alliance of all evil.

As the emerald absorbed the rain, it revealed its true form – the “orb of Envy “. Soon, the green light contaminated her blessed blood.

Mero tried to stop the ritual but in vain. It was too powerful. The suction grew intense. Teal screamed in agony as the very last piece of her soul was taken away. Just when Mero thought it had finally come to an end, a familiar voice whispered into her ears: “If I shall perish, we shall go together.” The orb fulfilled its owner’s last wish and brought forth a resultant catastrophic explosion which shattered the earth and engulfed the air.

After the shock from the explosion, the sea filled up the spaces of land. Nearly ninety-nine percent of Forenia had been destroyed, along with Mero.

Till date, the orb stands still on that very small portion of Forenia. Waiting , waiting for someone to harvest it again.

Chapter 2 - Lust of love, 1 sentence pitch and morale

Chapter 2 – The Lust of Love

1 sentence pitch:  A lost man soul which had been battle for ages, finally calmed down by a young female priest during a magical conflict which consist of something dear to him.

Morale: Love is the beginning of all knowledge as it could reveal the beauty of one soul.

2nd Chapter - The Lust of Love

Deep in the forest, lay a castle, one that had been long forgotten by people. Many heroes fought and fell in it. However it was also the place where a young girl understood the word “love”.

Amber, once a ruler of the world. She had secretly implanted a piece of her magic fragment within the castle before her death. The magic fragment came in the form of an orb named “Lust” which been concealed within one of her faithful servant, Uru. Over the past decades people of all races- elves, ogres, human, siren everything imaginable tried to obtain his power. However they were no match for the likes of Uru.

Uru was a dark priest who had pledged his loyalty to Amber, his mistress. His black shrouded figure exuded an intense aura of foreboding and power. He wielded a spiked mace and used witchcraft to terminate his enemies. Due to his indiscriminate killing spree, he soon earned the name, “Death Bringer”.

One night, Mauve, a dark-haired girl clad in the white embroidered robe o f a temple priest came forth to purify Uru. Though she looked far too young to hold such a position , her clear violet eyes seemed to hold much wisdom.

Dead littered the path. The corpse of many great heroes was found on the pathway of the red carpet. During the encounter with Uru, Mauve greeted him with her purification arrow as she knew that if she was to start any later, the chance of winning would be less than half. The arrow quickly divided itself into a hundred spears of light as they made their way through the barrier of Uru. Uru was no fool, he had already seen that coming but yet he had not made any attempt to avoid it . The spear pierced through every single substance of Uru. However, the damage was too minor for him to be afraid of.

Uru made his move; he used his witchcraft which caused Mauve to gape in fear, losing the focus needed to cast spells. As she tried to escape from his grasp. The walk became a jog, the jog turned into a run, the run to a sprint, and the exhilaration of the moment stirred her adrenaline. She summoned forth the mighty goddess, Alfina.

Alfina was the very image of elegance and grace. Uru was shocked when he saw Alfina, she was his wife, and a love that he thought was gone. As Alfina showered herself with luminous light on Uru, her silent tear trickled down. Uru didn’t fight back as he felt happiness in the end. Soon the conflict ended. Mauve glanced down at the couple one last time. Their spiritual bodies, a peaceful look on their faces, vanished in to the thin air.

She grabbed the orb and started her ritual. To her surprise, the orb was something else, something that she  could never bring herself to erase. It contaminated both the power of love and lust as she stared over the throne and wondered who the real victor was.

One sentence pitch and Morale - The inevitable wrath

A girl in search of the power to enhance peace and balance but instead she brought an end to her civilization.


Morale : Think before you do , do not over estimate yourself

1st chapter The Inevitable Wrath

  For many years, princess Scarlet who was the last survivor of Alanrius worked tirelessly to rebuild what she could for her sunder homeland. Leaving behind the "orb of wrath " which was one of the 7 generators that produced infinite magic source in the exchange of human soul.

      

       Back in those days. The sky was azure , the sea was clear and the sakura petals would always rain down to welcome the arrival of a new day in Alanrius. As usual , Scarlet would explore and discover new places from caverns to seas. She was ambitious , cheerful and she was well known as the most kind-hearted lady in Alanrius.

       Deep in the sacred forest named Maluvine , a beautiful melody carried by the wind would echo throughout the woods. Rumor had it that the melody was the sound made by the trees but in reality , no one had ever gone that deep into the forest. Therefore , Scarlet decided to set foot in it. As she went deeper into the wood , the melody gradually grew louder but the air grew thinner , making it harder for her to move on. Just then she saw a red orb that reflected the dull light from the sun to an almost blinding effect.

  

      The second she got hold of the orb , she was oozing with energy which she had never felt before. Her magic power had improved tremendously. She wielded her fire effortlessly even her single breath could clear out the mist which was there for decades. In that moment she was overwhelmed with terrible ecstasy at the content of her magic and thus , fell victim  to the undeniable power. Her soul was consumed by an insatiable hunger as "she" returned to Alanrius.

      Despite the warm welcome from the guards and people on her safe return , Scarlet cast a pool of lava that engulfed half of the land. As she made her way to the palace , buildings were burn down and innocent lives were taken by the vicious lava as it overcame even the water protection from the guard.

       Soon the message reached the ears of Alanrius's queen Minese and king Lucas , Scarlet's parent . They hesitated for awhile but due to the situation Lucas, the wise man , summoned the grizzly bear to join in the fight while Minese brought forth her pet pixie to cease the destruction.

        In the battle , the queen and king created a shield surrounding them and those who still remained. The guards acted as decoys to buy time for the pixie and the bear to make their final move.Pixie fluttered around swiftly with the help of her wings which were similar to that of a dragonfly's and dealt a direct and fatal magical blows on Scarlet. Grizzly bear struck Scarlet's head with immense force. 

    

        To everyone's shock their attempts were futile. It became harder to maintain the shield . The flame burnt down the protectors of Alanrius. As they fell , lifeless , the flame slowly devoured their souls.By the time Scarlet awakened herself from the orb's power,it was too late. Her foolishness had taken away all of her precious things. For the first time in her teenage life , she shed a tear. 

        Ever since that day the orb of wrath has been missing but its melody still echoes in the heart of Scarlet.

Story ( meaning )

One sentence pitch : It is the heart of our book  whittled down to one sentence.

Loglines                 : A logline is a one sentence summary a script, it tell the audience what a movie is and
                                 help them to decide.

Synopsis                 : A synopsis is a condensation of an outline of an book. A short write out of the movie.

Character Bio         : Character background.

Story line                : The plot or sub plot of the story. What happen from the start to the end.

Scene Breakdown  : You break down a script to read it per scene. Small outline of the scene.

Beats                      : Smallest unit of story telling it is a piece of story which something happen.

Climate                  : The most interesting part of stories , which make or break outcome.

Plot/Sub plot          : Plot is a term defined as   event that made up a story, as they related to one another
                                 a pattern. A sub plot is a secondary plot strand that is a supporting side story for the    
                                 main plot.

Turning Point       : Turning point means when an action or an event takes a turn for the better or for the
                                worse,or changes direction.




Script                     : A script is a document that outline and give voices and action to your character. 




Hook                      : Its the first part of movie which drawn audience attention and make them to watch on and                
                                on.


Motive                    : Something that causes a person to act in a certain way or a certain thing.




Conflict                   : Is when the character come to a point which they faces obstacles or situation which
                                 is very unpleasant or even self problem.


Dramatic Sequence : Is a sequence of event which link to another and another. 




Resolution               : A resolution is a conclusion , after all the obstacles of the whole story which 
                                 shown what the character achieve.




Outcome                 :An outcome is and end result of the film what the character achieve or learn in the end.

My character Amber

         Miss Amber was the only one that had been named the "diamond". She was as beautiful as perfect as everyone said.

         Luxurious brunette hair cascaded down her back. Her face was oval , eyes were azure , her lips full and seductive. She wore a silken dress , that matched her slim body. Diamond necklace hung on her delicate neck. Even her sisters one who would have also been classified as beautiful was pale in comparison with her.
      
         While having her tea break , on the exact time of 9 am every morning as usual. She had always been the apple to the male eyes. She can be ill-manner at times, however that aroma that give out by her, from her mouth , her body and even her "BURP" breath life to the atmosphere.
      
          Rumor say that she a bit hairy at the heels. She experiences the life of a prisoner before and her favorite tool was her pistol liked lipstick , which she place between her chest.

           Ultimately, Amber was indeed a mystery and elegant lady just like her name, which represent the "dark crystal".